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Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Character Study 1

She grabbed her favorite pair of boots on her way out of the house. It was a normal day for Mia, late for school and constantly in a rush. She reached for the car door, arms full of books, food, etc. and suddenly reached back. "OW," she exclaimed dropping all of her things. She felt a sharp pain in the back of her head, figuring it was her immature sister throwing something at her. she grabbed her things and rushed off to school.

Once there Mia raced out of her without a worry in her mind of hitting the ceiling, that was the beneifit of being 5' 0". As height comes Mia saw hers as an advantage at time but stuck in a judgemental highschool her height caused her to never really to be taken seriously and that up set her. Who would ever listen to the angry elf? She ran to her 0 period only to find the gate to school locked. This made her angry because her height limitation made her unable to the hop the fence.

Unlike before though, storming off to the other side of school Mia suddenly began to grew. She witnessed herself becoming eyelevel with the top of the fence, then the top of the buliding, then she was at a level where she could see the whole school. Mia grew to where she was atleast 30 ft tall...

To be continued.

I apologized for the indirect characterization and the direct characterization through out the rest. I'm not really that great with creative writing.

1 comment:

  1. Hahaha this was awesome! I based on height i see, at least you're not 5'5 & can't find a homecoming date whose taller than you. Nice story! :)

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